A Moment of Awe.

A reflection on lessons from a special place.

The depiction | A sketch by Melanie Jane

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There is a moment I once experienced.

A scene in which I saw.

That stands prominent in my memory.

At that moment, I was in awe.

I recall the scene as precious.

Genuine.

Serene.

It is stored away in my mind

As a reminder

Of the beauty in the small things.

I did not take a photo.

I did not even think to touch my phone.

I was captivated by the moment

That felt to be the purest of them all.

I was in the village in which I had been living.

In India itself.

Surrounded by palm trees and luscious greenery

A scene impeccable in and of itself.

It was a day like any other.

An auto-rickshaw ride home from a day spent training.

A friend asked me if I had seen the place

Where the water flows to from the streams.

He asked if I was interested.

Of course, I was eager to see.

We pulled off onto a road

Situated to the right.

We had driven past it every day.

Though it was never in my sight.

After a few bumps, twists and turns

In front of me stood a vision

Like nothing I had ever seen.

The streams flowed into a waterfall

That would then collect to form a pond.

But it was not this natural formation

That took my breath away from what I saw.

There were women in the water.

Some knee or hip deep.

They wore saris of saturated color

That glistened in the sun's beam.

They washed their belongings in the water

As they talked amongst themselves.

Some began to sing.

There was laughter and community.

Love for one another

In that moment could be seen.

If you can imagine in your mind

As I continue to write these words out.

The sound of flowing water

Mixed with the sounds created by this scene throughout.

They used the stones within the water

As washboards to clean their clothes.

They would smack the clothes against those formations

To ensure the cleanliness would impose.

They would talk amongst themselves.

They would chatter and sing.

The birds that would surround

Were also heard throughout this scene.

I sat on a rock

That stood near the water's edge.

Speechless at the moment

Even more grateful for this life journey

Onto which I had been led.

Tears formed in my eyes.

One scurried down my cheek.

As I strove to take in this precious moment

So in my mind,

Forever it could keep.

It has been challenging to find words

To describe my time in India.

For in my soul, the memories are precious.

Words never seem to be enough.

How can I articulate the deep connection

That I feel to this place within my soul?

How can I find words to justify

The heartfelt sense of gratitude that I hold?

It is moments like this

And many, many more

That I pray I can articulate

So others can see a glimpse into the precious memories that I hold.

It was a profound etching of culture.

A grand depiction of life.

A deep privilege to experience

And come to understand in my life.

Women laughing and singing

Embracing this moment that, for some, may seem mundane.

Finding joy in the small things that, in this life,

We live along our way.

Another piece that felt so pure

So refreshing and grand;

The fact that this moment was the ordinary.

Nothing special in this land.

To immerse themselves in the water

To carry out this part of their day.

Happiness in the small things.

Happiness, as they live along their way.

What if we grasped the small things

The duties and tasks that we take on throughout our days

Accomplished them with grace

Chose to laugh along our way?

I did not ponder much of anything

In that moment in which I was there.

I was captivated by my eye's vision.

Nothing would break my stare.

As I have continued on in life.

As this moment lives as a memory.

It continues to be deeply profound

And meaningful to me.

I am aware that doing laundry

Is not a scene that may seem grand.

But that is not what I focus on from this moment

That is not what makes this memory stand.

I focus on the beauty

That I saw on that day.

The once inexistent portrait

That I experienced along the way.

The sense of community.

The joy and laughter that was there.

The embrace of the normal.

The tactical pieces of life that we all share.

The reminder that we can create beauty

In any part of this journey that we call life.

The reminder that we can cultivate community.

That we can enjoy the small things.

Find laughter in the grand gestures

And even in the small moments in between.


A note from Melanie Jane

Thank you for taking a moment of your time to visualize this precious scene with me. ✧

The sketch above depicts the natural formation created by the waterfall and pond. I left the women out of the sketch so that your mind could envision the scene as you read or listen to my words. It is my hope that others may find their own meaning from this scene that I experienced along my way.

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